Coins

Turn over your wallet
And let everything untidy on the ground
Look at a coin, and think.
Then, tell yourself what you get from a two-side circle
One picture is stamped on first side
One also on the second one
Its hard to see both sides together
And, thats the way coins are always  
Tear human body 
And let their organs messy on the floor 
Look at the heart and think
Then, tell yourself what you get from a beating fist
There are uncountable sides
With uncalculated pictures in it
Its difficult to see even a revealed surface 
And, thats the way humans are always

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ตานูน 13 พ.ค. 2553 21:42 น. - ID 134713

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14 พฤษภาคม 2553 09:30 น. - comment id 1127385

นับหนึ่งไม่ถึงสิบเลยค่ะตอนนี้

Gemini58

14 พฤษภาคม 2553 09:56 น. - comment id 1127392

WOW!!!!
It's very cool poem. The whole stanza is interesting.
Where did you get it คะ คุณตานูน

ตานูน

15 พฤษภาคม 2553 23:01 น. - comment id 1127707

This is one of my poems. i myself did write it. i am glad you could understand and like it also.

Gemini58

16 พฤษภาคม 2553 04:09 น. - comment id 1127740

You have an interesting thing going here in this poem. The concept of, "there's two sides to the same coin" was literally and beautifully explained in your poem. It honestly opened my mind to think about how people (and coins ;D) are. Please keep up the good work.

Gemini58

18 พฤษภาคม 2553 09:32 น. - comment id 1128129

Time is...the coin of your life. 
It is the only coin you have, 
and only you can determine...how it will be spent.
Be careful...do not let other people spend it for you.

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