In the cloudy day, The weather is worst than what to say This world is kept in a bag of darkness And heavy rain crashes to every outside face After the gray sky and the pouring rain, The western sun is going to shine again Raindrops fall from buildings roofs And show some sophisticated proves Humans inevitably confront with troubles Surely, it is not easy like eating apples Some give up or abandon With the sense of frustration As long as the sun goes on Every hope would not be torn All of the troubles can be successfully solved somehow To work, just start getting dow
3 พฤษภาคม 2553 14:38 น. - comment id 1125185
ถึงแม้เราไม่เมาไทยไยเมาปะกิต เพียงแต่คิดขึ้นมาพาฉงน อ่านอังกฤษชิดซ้ายก็หลายคน มาอับจนเพราะคำ...ว่าทำใจ แหะๆๆๆ มั่วๆ ขอรับ ทักทายๆๆ
18 พฤษภาคม 2553 08:49 น. - comment id 1128120
The eloquence of the poem really emphasizes the message of perserverance created in this poem. Please continue to use wonderful words to bring out your message you are trying to present in your poem. Very nice to read; please write more.